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You wanted me to write you a critique for this one. As I tell everyone; don't mind the star-ratings, they aren't informative.
Photographically:
When I look at your settings they tell me the following; this is going to me a somewhat blurry picture with a good chance of missing the focus with no help from the aperture.
The reason for this is that 1/30s is from a handheldperspective a very slow shutterspeed especially when you are photographing something that's living/something in motion. If you look on the exterior of the model you'll see that it's somewhat blurry on the edges.
An aperture of f3.3 means that you have the lens more or less wideopen and you are very dependant on having a shutterspeed that helps you "hit" with the focus in order to get that blurry background.
There are several options to remedy this, the two most common are on/off camera flash or higher iso-value. You need to compensate with light to be able to get a shutterspeed that allows you to freeze the subject.
I get what you are trying to achieve here, but in order to do so you need to familarize yourself more with your camera and how shutterspeed, aperture and iso affects your captures. I'll add a video for you that's going to shed some light on the subject.
It might sound boring, but the first thing I do when I buy myself a new camera is to read the instruction manual, because it's important to know the possibilities and limitations of the camera you are using in order to be able to get the best possible results from it.
I hope this was helpful
Be sure to check out this video: [link]
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